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你好呀，我是來(lái)自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，給大家?guī)?lái)一個(gè)【生活類話題】的雅思大作文真題的范文。

老規(guī)矩，以下是正文目錄：

1，題目

2，審題

3，高分范文

4，范文朗讀

5，范文地道詞匯中英對(duì)照，包括：

• 題目改述
• 討論 觀點(diǎn)類大作文高分句型
• 展示“詞匯豐富度”的詞匯&短語(yǔ)
• 展示“連貫與銜接”的詞匯&句型

上題：

In many countries more and more people buy a wider range of household goods like televisions microwave ovens and rice cookers. Do you think this has more pros than cons?

審題：

• Type: Discuss & Opinion 討論 觀點(diǎn) (我的觀點(diǎn)：more pros)
• Body 1: damage to the environment waste of resources
• Body 2: brings greater convenience good for the economy
• Key words: buy a wider range of this has more pros than cons

- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗讀 -

2022年雅思外教范文#12：家用電器越買越多，利弊是什么？（含音頻）

▲范文音頻戳這里▲

In many nations the increase in disposable income and burgeoning demands for a higher quality life have led to a growth in domestic appliances. This push towards increased convenience though it may damage the environment and can be seen as a waste of resources seems clear in my opinion to have brought more benefits than negatives.

One of the often-touted drawbacks of consumerism is the negative effect it has on the environment particularly in relation to non-durable goods such as home appliances. By possessing a variety of these appliances such as blenders and ovens for which have limited life-spans many of these machines will find themselves in dumps unrecycled and bleeding toxins into the surrounding natural environment. It is also commonly cited that by having so many choices and by having a supposed need for so many of these machines that we are squandering our natural resources simply for the pleasure of enjoying so called ‘home-conveniences’. In both cases however future technology will most likely help solve these issues.

In any case and despite such arguments it is without doubt that the benefits from owning these appliances can bring a plethora of positive benefits. One of the most important is that they provide people with convenience liberating regular citizens from laborious and trivial domestic chores. A simple example of this is the robotic floor sweeper which compared to the time before such a gadget allows one to maintain a clean home without the need to put time aside for cleaning and thus frees up the person to do other tasks. This demand for convenience also has a positive impact amongst others on the economy since as people’s expectations for a less arduous lifestyle increases so does the need for manufacturing output.

In conclusion although I believe there are potential drawbacks to the multitude of manufactured household goods on the market the problems associated with owning such devices will fade into obscurity once the advancement of technology makes them more environmentally friendly and so in the meantime I also believe the overriding boon they bring is greater.

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- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -

- (1) Introduction

Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 題目改述:

• In many countries = In many nations
• more and more people buy a wider range of = the increase in disposable income and burgeoning demands
• household goods = domestic appliances (televisions microwave ovens rice cookers etc)

Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay 觀點(diǎn)類大作文高分句型：

• This… seems clear in my opinion to have brought more benefits than negatives.

Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“連貫與銜接”的詞匯和短語(yǔ):

• led to
• This
• though it
• and can be seen as
• seems clear
• to
• than

Vocabulary 高分地道詞匯和短語(yǔ)：

• disposable income 可支配收入
• burgeoning demands 快速增長(zhǎng)的需求
• domestic appliances 家用電器
• push towards 推動(dòng)
• a waste of resources 資源浪費(fèi)

- (2) Body 1 -

Aspects that must be referred to 這段需要提到：

• cons (because I think pros are greater) — environment and waste of resources

Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高頻句型：

• One of the…is

Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道詞匯和短語(yǔ)：

• often-touted 經(jīng)常被吹捧的
• drawbacks 缺點(diǎn)
• consumerism 消費(fèi)主義
• non-durable goods 非耐用品
• home appliances 家電
• a variety of 各種各樣的；形形色色的
• limited life-spans 有限的使用周期
• dump (n) 垃圾場(chǎng)；廢物堆
• unrecycled 不可回收
• bleeding toxins into the surrounding natural environment 釋放有害物質(zhì)，污染周邊環(huán)境
• commonly cited 常提到的
• squandering 浪費(fèi)；揮霍
• ‘home-conveniences’ 便利之家
• future technology 未來(lái)科技

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words conjunctions relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“連貫與銜接”的詞匯和短語(yǔ)：

• is
• particularly in relation to
• such as
• By possessing
• these
• such as
• for which
• many of these
• find themselves
• and
• It is also
• that by having… and by having
• for
• that we
• simply for
• In both cases however
• solve these

- (3) Body 2 -

Aspects that must be referred to 這段需要提到：

• pros: convenience and good for the economy

Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高頻句型：

• In any case and despite such arguments it…

Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道詞匯和短語(yǔ)：

• a plethora of 大量的；過(guò)多的
• liberating 解放
• laborious 辛苦的；費(fèi)力的
• trivial 瑣碎的
• domestic chores 家務(wù)
• robotic floor sweeper 掃地機(jī)器人
• gadget 小工具；小設(shè)備
• put time aside 節(jié)約時(shí)間
• frees up 釋放；騰出
• people’s expectations for 對(duì)……的期待
• arduous 費(fèi)力的；費(fèi)勁的
• manufacturing output 制造業(yè)產(chǎn)出

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words conjunctions relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“連貫與銜接”的詞匯和短語(yǔ)：

• without doubt that
• the benefits from
• these
• can bring
• One of the most important is that they
• liberating
• this
• which compared to
• the time before such
• allows one
• without the need to
• and thus
• other
• This
• also
• amongst others
• since as
• so does

- (4) Conclusion -

Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高頻句型：

• In conclusion
• I believe… I also believe

Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道詞匯和短語(yǔ)：

• potential 潛在的
• the multitude of 眾多的
• manufactured household goods 制造的家用產(chǎn)品
• on the market 在市場(chǎng)上
• the problems associated with 與……相關(guān)的問(wèn)題
• fade into obscurity 消失；消除
• the advancement of technology 科技進(jìn)步
• environmentally friendly 對(duì)環(huán)境友好的
• overriding 凌駕于
• boon 好處；益處

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words conjunctions relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“連貫與銜接”的詞匯和短語(yǔ)：

• although
• there
• the
• such
• once
• them
• and so in the meantime
• They

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